Query Packages

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Brings your query letter to the next level to grab a literary agent’s attention.

The basic query package includes:

  • In-text comments
  • Line edits
  • Suggestions
  • A onetime editorial pass


For the advanced query package, we go back-and-forth with edits until you’re satisfied. It includes:

  • In-text comments
  • Line edits
  • Suggestions
  • 3+ editorial passes


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Evolves your synopsis to catch literary agents’ eyes.

Don’t worry about page count. Can overwrite because I can edit it down to the standard.


  • In-text comments
  • Line edits
  • Suggestions


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First Chapter

Hatches your first chapter to captivate readers and literary agents with your prose.

Includes copyediting for your first chapter. Can personalize to either do a certain number of pages, the full first chapter, etc.

Price depends on word count. For 2023, it’s based off a $35 hourly rate.

She finished the contract early and gave me great advice. Her work was thorough and clear. Her suggestions and edits for my query letter were awesome as well! She was easy to communicate with and very kind. I hope to work with her again in the future.

Elizabeth Shores

Let’s turn your book into a beautiful wonder.